Conventions Identify a particular grammar convention that presents difficulty for a student or a small group. Explicitly teach the English convention using an appropriate lesson in the ELL and Transition Handbook.
FOCUS/IDEAS The skit is built
around an event in nature.
ORGANIZATION/PARAGRAPHS
The skit is written in time-order.
VOICE The skit expresses
the ideas and feelings of the writer.
WORD CHOICE The writer uses
strong verbs (spied, guarded) to further the skit's actions.
SENTENCES Sentences
sound like those used in ordinary conversation.
CONVENTIONS Conventions
of drama, such as the characters' names followed by dialogue and the action in parentheses, are used.
Model the Trait
Improve Writing
Prewrite and Draft
Draft and Revise
Connect to Unit Writing
READING-WRITING CONNECTION
Pushing Up the Sky tells how people raised the sky by working together.
The play is written in script form with stage directions.
Students will write a skit using conventions of the form and strong verbs.
MODEL CONVENTIONSDiscuss Writing Transparency 12A. Then discuss the model and conventions.
The writer has used the conventions of script writing for this skit. Every spoken part is labeled with the speaker's name in dark type. The name is followed by a colon. Stage directions in parentheses describe what actors do. The writer has begun every sentence with a capital letter and ended with a period. This helps make the ideas clear.
Display Writing Transparency 12B. Read the directions and work together to replace general verbs with specific ones.
USE STRONG VERBS Tomorrow we will write a skit about working together. I could write about kids who build a tree house. What strong verbs would help readers pictured what they did? I might write, "Jerry scurried up and down the ladder like a monkey." The verb scurried paints a more vivid picture than a general verb like went or climbed.
GUIDED WRITINGSome students may need more help recognizing strong verbs. Point out some strong verbs in other selections.
Pushing Up the Sky tells about people working together to do something important.
Think about a real or imaginary time when a group worked together.
Now write a skit about that time.
Writing Test Tips
Use only a few characters. Have their speeches move the skit’s action along.
Use a narrator to help set up the story and identify the conflict or the problem to be solved.
Use strong verbs in sentences in parentheses to describe the characters’ actions.
GETTING STARTED Students can do any of the following:
Use a graphic organizer such as a concept map with Things that can’t be done alone in the center.
With a group, discuss things you want to do and need help with. List ways to work together.
Brainstorm about problems your class could work on together.
EDITING/REVISING CHECKLIST
Does the skit have a few characters who act out a legend about nature?
Is dialogue used to move the story along?
Do strong verbs show characters' actions?
Are words with the prefixes un-, re-, mis-, and dis- spelled correctly?
See The Grammar and Writing Book, pp. 116–121.
Revising Tips
Conventions
Tell as much of the story through dialogue as possible. Do not use quotations.
Use a narrator to tell parts of the story that are hard to tell through characters.
Give directions for characters' actions to tell some parts of the story. Use parentheses.
PUBLISHING Groups of students can perform their skits. Some students may wish to revise their work later.
ASSESSMENT Use the scoring rubric to evaluate students’ work.
PREVIEW THE UNIT PROMPT
Write an essay that compares and contrasts two things in nature. Your subjects could be two plants, animals, seasons, or weather conditions. Use words that show what you are describing.
APPLY
A compare and contrast essay compares and contrasts two things. It uses transition words and details to show likenesses and differences.
Strong verbs help make a compare and contrast essay clear and forceful.