



| A penguin and a whale | There are too many differences and not enough likenesses. |
| A tornado and a hurricane | I don’t know enough about these things. |
| A maple tree and a pine tree | There are many similarities and differences, and both can be described vividly. |
MODEL This student has thought of an attention-getting topic sentence and a conclusion that summarizes the essay. The student has listed the main similarities and differences between the two trees. Now the student can write a draft by adding details about each similarity and difference.
| Original: | Elaborated: |
| The leafy part of the maple tree is wide. |
The branches and leaves form a full, rounded shape. |
| The pine tree has an arrow shape. |
The pine tree is shaped like an arrow, with a wide bottom and a pointed top. |