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AFTER READING
OBJECTIVES
Genre Story Review
Writer’s Craft Know Your Audience
Writing Trait Conventions
  • Identify the characteristics of a story review.
  • Write a story review, keeping the audience in mind.
  • Focus on conventions.
  • Use a rubric.
ELL
Conventions Identify a particular grammar convention that presents difficulty for a student or a small group. Explicitly teach the English convention using an appropriate lesson in the ELL and Transition Handbook.
Writing Trait
FOCUS/IDEAS The review
focuses on a story the
audience would like.
ORGANIZATION/PARAGRAPHS
The review states an opinion and then lists reasons for it.
VOICE The writer has an
individual, persuasive voice.
WORD CHOICE The writer uses
persuasive words and vivid descriptive words.
SENTENCES Sentences of
different lengths and kinds are used.
CONVENTIONS Grammar and
mechanics are excellent,
including use of conjunctions.
DAY 1
Model the Trait
DAY 2
Improve Writing
DAY 3
Prewrite and Draft
DAY 4
Draft and Revise
DAY 5
Connect to Unit Writing
READING-WRITING CONNECTION
  • Me and Uncle Romie is realistic fiction.
  • Ideas in Me and Uncle Romie are selected for an audience that the writer can describe.
  • Students will write a story review that will tell the audience why they would or would not like the story.
MODEL CONVENTIONS Discuss Writing Transparency 25A. Then discuss the model and the writing trait of conventions.
Think AloudThe writer has reviewed the story Me and Uncle Romie. The writer gives an opinion about the story and supports the opinion with reasons. The reasons are in increasing order of importance. Finally, the writer suggests that the audience take action and read the story.
Writing Transparency
Writing Transparency 25A
with | without Answers
WRITER'S CRAFT
Know Your Audience
Display Writing Transparency 25B. Read the directions and identify the audience for the writing.
Think AloudKNOW YOUR AUDIENCE When I write a story
review, it is helpful to
know who is likely to read
it. I try to figure out who my audience will be. Am I writing for my classmates or an audience who loves animals or maybe sports? Identifying the audience will help you select and write the details in your story review.
GUIDED PRACTICE Some
students may need more help
knowing their audience. Review
different kinds of writing, such
as a story for young people, a
newspaper article, and a recipe.
Have students identify the
audience for the writing and
explain how it affects the details
the author has chosen.
Writing Transparency
Writing Transparency 25B
with | without Answers
READ THE WRITING PROMPT
on page 271 in the Student Edition.
In Me and Uncle Romie, Uncle Romie says everyone has special stories that he or she loves.
Think about a story that is special to you.
Now write a story review telling why readers should read the story.
Writing Test Tips
  • State your opinion in the first sentence
    or two.
  • Use descriptions and examples of the book's characters, setting, and plot to support your opinion.
  • Do not tell the entire plot of the story. You may mention story events as you give reasons for enjoying the story.
GETTING STARTED Students can do any of the following:
  • Create a chart showing characters, settings, and important events of the story that will be reviewed.
  • As a group, discuss stories they have enjoyed.
  • Use the textbook to review other stories they particularly liked.
EDITING/REVISING
CHECKLIST
  • Does the review focus on a specific work of fiction and why it is recommended?
  • Does the review show that the writer knows his or her audience?
  • Are conjunctions used correctly?
  • Are words with the suffixes -y, -ish, -hood, and -ment spelled correctly?
See The Grammar and Writing Book, pp. 198–203.
Revising Tips
Conventions
  • Begin every sentence with a capital letter and end with the correct end punctuation.
  • Make sure pronouns are used correctly.
  • Use conjunctions to combine some short sentences into longer ones.
PUBLISHING Students can form story review groups and discuss the stories they reviewed. Some students may wish to revise their work later.
ASSESSMENT Use the scoring rubric to evaluate students' work.
Week 1
Editorial 169g–169h
Week 2
Write Your Opinion
193g–193h
Week 3
Week 4
Answer a Question 243g–243h
Week 5
Story Review
275g–275h
Persuasive Letter
PREVIEW THE UNIT PROMPT
Write a letter asking a parent to let you travel to another country, dress in a special way, or eat a particular food. Think of reasons you should be allowed to do this thing.
APPLY
  • A persuasive letter tries to convince a reader to think or act a certain way. It uses facts, reasons, and examples to make a point.
  • In a persuasive letter, writers put their reasons in the order they think will be most persuasive to readers.
Writing Workshop   Story Review
Trait of the Week
Conventions
 
   
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Writing Trait Rubric  
Rubric 4 3 2 1
Conventions
Excellent control of grammar, capitalization,
and punctuation
Good control of grammar, capitalization,
and punctuation
Limited control of grammar, capitalization,
and punctuation
Poor control of grammar, capitalization,
and punctuation
No errors or only minor errors in review
No serious errors that affect understanding
in review
Few distracting errors in review
Many errors that
affect understanding in review